l-lappy: Yeah, I feel like stage 1-2 could need slightly bit more change, but as long as this is limited to single stages it is alright for me to approve them. Just don't like to approve Knuffel that lack change in several stages. So, yeah, I guess I would approve it like this, thank you for going through the effort of editing it.~Thanks Firn,I've tweak a few lines I noticed in the first stage and noticed 2nd stage hand was transparent for some reason.
I'm going to keep in mind in the future with the starting stages
less = more.
And try and make more of a change with the outfit with each stage.