((wallflower, Darren seems to be like your seccond charactar, maybe you can write a profile to him?

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What am I going to do!? If I only were bigger! Or braver! … The white eagle, whose name was Ivory, looked at her like he was waiting for her to do something. Tawny looked down on the ground and saw the feather.
Am I supposed to…"Alright then... why don't you lead the way....We don't have all night..."
Ignore the feather! He wants me to fly! Now!“O…of course!”
Tawny spread out her wings, and started to run and flapped with her wings at the same time. When she was in the air she had to take deep breaths to calm herself. She had to focus so she could catch something, she didn’t want to think of what would happen if she didn’t… she glanced back at the two eagles. The white one didn’t look as big in the air as he had done on the ground… and not that scary… Tawny shook her head. No, they were eagles! And they had crashed into her, threatened her, and taken her as a captive!
I have to focusThough it wasn’t that simple, when she didn’t think of the terrifying situation she was in, she thought of her friends. She couldn’t fly anywhere near them, then the eagles maybe would take them too!
Then there was a movement on the ground. Without a sound tawny pressed her wings to her body and dived down. When she was a few meters away from the prey she spread out her wings again, as silent as when she had dived. A few seconds later, she had the little gerbil I her claws. She killed it easily and laid it on the ground as she landed.
I’m lucky that hunting is something that I’m good at…She waited for the eagles to land so they could take the prey.